Moloch
Moloch whose love is endless oil and stone!
–Allen Ginsburg
Drilling spilling pumping
blasting
removing every mountaintop
to find the pearl
of great price
casting the star
named Wormwood
into every river
made bitter
unwilling to say—Enough!
until every son and every daughter
has passed through the fire . . .
I stand off
and see the smoke of burning,
and the circle-jerk
of those who wax rich
through the abundance
of her delicacies.
O God! We all
(yes, stupid fuckers one and all)
invoked this beast insatiable
conjured
him from the smoky pit in order
to have our way with him,
this pet that does not merely
bite the tit
that feeds it—
it devours all
sometimes slowly
over time
sometimes
in one huge gulp.
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Tonight is beat poetry at dVerse MeetingtheBar. Even if you aren’t up to writing tonight, you owe it to yourself to head on over to read Gay’s informative article. I took inspiration tonight from Ginsburg, John of the Apocalypse, Jeremiah the Old Testament prophet, and human greed and stupidity. Seemed like a good blend for a beat poem to me.
Nico, this was very good. /Excellent use of imagery and the language was strong of voice. >KB
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and the circle-jerk
of those who wax rich
through the abundance
of her delicacies. …oh yeah, you got it…cry it out..
they probably wont listen but…bite the tit, yes…
burn our earth…there is profit in it
even if also our death
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Yes, the beast insatiable indeed. I like those you used for inspiration…making for a strong piece!
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Oh yes a good recipe for beat…that damn beast seems to be rising his head from the pit everywhere… Very powerful!
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Yikes, you conjure a beast we all despise and denounce but feed all the while, excellent work!
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did my comment get eaten…? ugh
def. an interesting mix for a beat poem…the son and daughter part .. and not willing to stop in the name of profit..ugh… a sad truth..
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Great passion, and I think you really got the whole “beat” thing down!
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A good blend indeed! Very effective beat poem.
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smiles… The language flow really help so many things and mildly some influence mood in this! Good work and moves in this
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Oh Yes it does! (The beast has part of all of us.) Very very good!
Anna :o]
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This is Brilliant. I bow to you! I have some FB friends working on these issues in northern PA and NY who should read this (and get angrier, I'm sure)!
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Superb – the precision of your language and your metaphors addressing the great carnage being done to ourselves and our planet in the name of MORE and GREED – taking themselves down with it for that temporary fix. Excellent piece, thank you.
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Thanks KB–when attempting a strong voice, one cannot go far wrong by modeling Ginsburg and the Old Testament!
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Thanks Brian–immediate profit, but net loss. More and more are crying out; maybe one day profit will be seen with farther-reaching eyes.
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Thanks Mary, I tried to think of the hardest-hitting social critics, and felt I couldn't do better than these!
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Thanks Di–unfortunately, once the beast arises, it's nearly impossible to send it back to the pit.
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Thanks Anna–no matter how hard we try, we are all complicit to some degree–at least those of us in developed countries. Though there are some brave few who have opted out, turned completely self-sufficient–but then again, to run to the hills is also to remove the possibility to enact positive change. We seem stuck in it, for better or worse.
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Thanks Claudia–Ginsburg especially among the Beats used biblical language and cadence to get his point across. Very powerful. The OT prophets were not opposed to coarseness and shocking actions to win the ear of their audience either. Which one went for a few years naked? . . . Ezekiel I think. That kind of thing demands attention!
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Thanks Bryan–Beat poetry is good for a little release of passion!
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Thanks Gabriella, I'm happy you think so!
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Thanks Murphy, that is very kind of you!
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Thanks Anna–as I mentioned to the other Anna above, we are all sadly complicit in some way or the other.
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Thanks Susan–you are too kind. Sometimes we will not be motivated to act unless by anger, so in this case anger is justified, I believe!
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Thanks Gay–great prompt! I can only take partial credit for the language and metaphors, since I intentionally tried to tap into the righteous indignation and condemnation one finds in the biblical prophets, much like Ginsburg was able to do with wonderful effectiveness.
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Love how you did this.. the images the blasting and the beast.. anger and resentment. Very much beat.
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Thanks Bjorn, I'm glad you liked it!
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Excellent capture of beat language, rhythm, tone and indignation.
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Thanks V. B.–some things (not many, but some) are worth getting indignant about!
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I like the sources you chose to bounce around this topic and with this rhymic beat form it makes it all the more frustrating to contemplate the 'why's' of it all.
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right flavor and touch love it
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Thanks Katy, frustration can be a good catalyst sometimes.
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Thanks Chris–sometimes the mood is right for a good rant.
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