Two sages meet
to speak
of eternity.
They sit beneath trees
that have rooted
for centuries,
beside the stream
winding between stones
for millennia,
stones slowly rising
under a sky
that has hovered
for unknown ages;
before trees, streams,
stones, grass, sages.
Surrounded
by time they sit,
wordless.
For dVerse. Mary has us thinking and writing about time. I like thinking about time, but it always leaves me a little befuddled. Anyway, write a little something and join in the sharing!
Ah, for some things there are no words. Time is perhaps one of those concepts that leaves many speechless, even sages.
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Thanks Mary–for me, the more I think about time, the less I know what to say.
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Your lines evoke ancient wisdom in a soothing and serene way. A fine oasis in today’s chaos.
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Thanks Gabriella–we need an oasis now and then.
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The Chinese Art is perfect for this Zen parable, & it is rife with truth & objectivity–for if we are the co-creators of the universe, within each lifetime we struggle to raise the veil of forgetfulness every time we chew on the edge of the puzzle; why are we here?
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Thanks Glenn–if you ever figure out why we’re here, let me know, ok?
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You describe that artwork perfectly. With your Zen-like, precise wording it is a meaningful illustration.
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Thanks Bodhi, I’m glad you liked it.
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oh I like the meditative quality of your poem – beautifully done! K
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Thanks Kathleen, I’m happy you liked it.
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This was so enjoyable and written with wisdom as the sages speak of eternity in silence..
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Thanks Truedessa–silence seems like the best thing sometimes.
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Sometimes words are not needed ~ For such a deep theme, you have handled the topic with light & deft brushstrokes ~ Lovely share Jeff ~
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Thanks Grace, I’m glad you liked it.
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the poem takes us to infinity that time is…sages did not want to limit time within words…a fascinating write Jeff…
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Thanks Sumana–words can reveal much, but they can also be limiting.
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yeah… i can imagine how they sit wordless… it puts things into another relation when we’re confronted with those things that have been there for so long already
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Thanks Claudia–words aren’t needed when we enter into a timeless experience.
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is it odd that I feel the need to sit next to a river by a tree with the mountains and skies hovering above? it seems so tranquil…hmm…and the idea of escape time while being surrounded by it…peaceful.
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Thanks rmp, I hope my poem brings you a little tranquility. And no, it’s not odd at all. What I find odd is that there are people who don’t see the value of an afternoon by the river!
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I like the scene you depict. It portrays how many of us feel when we consider time, elusive, mysterious, enigmatic. Befuddled is the best word. Good writing.
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Thanks Myrna–time isn’t the only thing that befuddles me!
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People don’t sit with each other any more…they have to talk while glancing at their smartphones. My Grandmother’s generation use to sit with each other. I remember it. I was soothing and reflective.I think I was born in the wrong era. I quite fancy the idea of afternoon naps after lunch zzzzing in the sunshine with just the sound of cicadas and bright red geraniums. Sorry Nico/Jeff I am raving on a bit here….taking a reverie trip! đŸ™‚
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Thanks Cress–I agree. I also remember when people talked with each other without the electronic distractions, and it bugs the hell out of me. Rave on!
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Oh, this is lovely! The wisdom of time superseding our own!
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Thanks Jenny, I’m happy you liked it!
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I love the Zen-like feel of this. Truly in the face of eternity there is nothing we can say.
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Thanks Victoria, I’m glad you liked it!
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This has such a beautiful serene feeling to it.
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Thanks Kathryn, I’m happy you liked it!
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Hi Jeff, Sages chatting about time can lead to a fascinating discussion. Sort of timeless you might say. Have a good day.
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Thanks Michael–even if words fall short, they are still all we have to work with!
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I liked this.. it shows us trying to understand the infinities of time, but then words may short… I like the flow of the poem, it’s a very interesting thought and a great ending…
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Just Perfect!
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Beautifully written.
I noticed you mentioned Wu Zhen in some of your other posts and I wonder; do you speak chinese?! đŸ˜‰
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